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2026-01-28

The Moon

The world is enveloped in moonlight. A poetic feeling arises and softness pervades the atmosphere. At this time, a breeze of ten accompanies the silvery light of the moon and gives the world a peculiar appearance and the people a peculiar feeling. The air is suffused with a sweet scent, driving away the ugliness and squal or of the daytime, soothing the distressed and wretched souls. If
you sing a song, your voice will reach the clouds. If you read a poem, it will echo in the mountains and valleys far away. If you hum a lullaby, its rhythm will send the whole sleepless city to dreams.

简 评
本文描写了月光下的都市沉浸在一片安宁与恬静中。不再有眩目的阳光,一阵清风伴随着银色的月光,空气中弥漫着丝丝芳香。月光驱散了白天的一切丑陋和肮脏,抚慰着痛苦和不幸的人们。最后三个句子结构并列,意义递进,以唱歌或吟诗作比,表现出月夜的宁静。
本文侧重于对感觉的描写,包括具体的和抽象的,充满了想像力。读来像一首优美的诗歌,在写景的同时表达了作者对社会现实的思考,对安宁生活的向往。
(点评教师:黄莺)


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